My Fiction

Nimeesha · Trimis: 18/04/2007 12:56 Titlul subiectului: My Fiction

incep cu o descriere pe care am avut-o ca tema la scoala

1. Fermecata
Pasesc usor pe scoicile sparte. Simt nisipul reavan sub talpa mea, zbatandu-se.
Ma asez ușor pe o patura asternuta pe suprafata racoroasa, indreptandu-mi privirea spre marea potolita.
Inchid ochii incet. Parca si acum aud vocea mistica, stinsa, ce vine dinspre marea singuratica, tipatul tacut al valurilor si tacerea chinuitoare a calmului marii. Vantul ma invaluie intr-o mantie rece, tresarind usor la fiecare adiere.
Ridicand pleoapele greoi, ochii imi sunt vrajiti de peisajul enigmatic. Mii de culori amestecate impanzesc bolta cereasca.
Soarele pestrit, temeprat de albastrul tacut al marii, incepe sa se ascunda firav dupa apa tihnita.
Racoarea cuprinde intreaga priveliste, totul capatand o nuanta sumbra. Stelele ies la iveala, lucind debil deasupra marii intinse. Zambesc melancolic, uitandu-ma spre vazduhul parca mort.
Ma ridic de pe patura si plec, luand cu mine amintiri si ocazii pe care nu le voi uita niciodata...

pareri?
;-)

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I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

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anda · Hilf Mir Fliegen Data inscrierii: 15/Mar/2007 Mesaje: 277

Wai ce tare e!Cum zicea... le ai cu povestile.. :-P

SweetPoisen · Vizitator

ce tareee!!!!!

meriti nota 10 pentru tema asta!!!

bagi contu',nu-i asa? :-D

Nimeesha · Trimis: 19/04/2007 10:48 Titlul subiectului:

voi scrie diseara, dupa ce voi veni de la scoala :-P

fiecare povestire e diferita
nu sunt legate
:-)

merci pt pareri :kiss:

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I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

purple · Trimis: 19/04/2007 14:52 Titlul subiectului:

Deci wow!!
''vazduhul parca mort'' ai talent
te pricepi la scris :w00t:

abia astept sa mai pui

Nimeesha · Trimis: 20/04/2007 10:07 Titlul subiectului:

merci pt pareri :kiss:

a doua proza

2. Haotic
Stau cu picioarele la piept in coltul camerei, si cu fruntea rezemata de genunchi.
Plang. Plang pentru ca, in sfarsit am acceptat faptul ca nu am nici un rost pe lumea asta. Dar imi pun eterna intrebare: oare de ce?
Oare de ce nu am nici o semnificatie pentru cei din jur? Nu merit sa aud din partea cuiva un "Salut"?
Oare de ce atunci cand scriu, scriu numai despre tristete si planset?
Oare de ce nu imi gasesc talentul? Oare chiar sunt o copila fara nici un talent, fara nici un har de care as putea fi mandra?
Oare de ce nu am pe nimeni care sa-mi aline tristetea cu o mangaiere fragila, si plansetul cu un sarut?
Dar, imi pun o intrebare mai presus de celelalte:
Oare de ce nu imi doresc decat moarte?

asta e varza
nu am avut inspiratie :-|

_________________
I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

purple · Trimis: 20/04/2007 18:44 Titlul subiectului:

deci nu e deloc varza
i like it
mai pune te rog!!!!

Nimeesha · Trimis: 20/04/2007 19:20 Titlul subiectului:

anda · Hilf Mir Fliegen Data inscrierii: 15/Mar/2007 Mesaje: 277

WOW e tare!bv!mai compune!ai talent!

Nimeesha · Trimis: 22/04/2007 14:19 Titlul subiectului:

3. Ploua
Ploua. Stau pe o banca, intr-o rochita scurta. Intind mana, sa simt picurii de apa morti. Ce-mi place sa ii simt preligandu-se pe mana mea! Ma simt ca o zeita cand sunt sigura pe timp de ploaie. Ma simt unica!
Parul umed imi cade pe umerii goi, intinzandu-se ușor pe spate.
Atata calm in jurul meu si totusi atata haos. Atat de rece si totusi atat de cald. Atat de multa iubire si totusi atat de multa ura.
Ploua fara incetare. Vantul incepe sa bata, luand frunzele cu el in locuri neelucidate.
In picioarele goale, pasesc in baltile cu apa, racorindu-mi picioarele fierbinti, incalzite de pantofiorii rosiatici.
Ma intorc la bancuta de lemn, si ma intind pe ea. Adorm cu un gand ce nu-mi da pace. Gandul ca m-ai putea parasi.
_________________
I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

SweetPoisen · Vizitator

wow ce tare!!!!

imi place...

sa mai scrii, ai mult talent!!!! :kissing2:

Nimeesha · Trimis: 22/04/2007 15:32 Titlul subiectului:

Nimeesha · Trimis: 28/04/2007 11:45 Titlul subiectului:

4. Departe
(Esti atat de departe de mine..)
De ce nu pot sa te ating?... De ce nu pot sa iti simt buzele fine pe dermă mea?
(Imi este atat de dor de tine...)
De ce nu pot sa iti simt bratele calde in jurul corpului meu? De ce nu pot sa te sarut?
(Te iubesc atat de mult...)
De ce nu poti sa fii al meu?...
Esti atat de departe...

very shtupid :-|

_________________
I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

SweetPoisen · Vizitator

ai putea face din chestia asta un cantec!!! :w00t:

bv!bv! tine-o tot asa!!!! :kissing2:

anda · Hilf Mir Fliegen Data inscrierii: 15/Mar/2007 Mesaje: 277

Ce tare e!BV!Mai scrie!

Nimeesha · Trimis: 29/04/2007 19:35 Titlul subiectului:

merci pentru complimente!

5. Alegeri, Alegeri, Alegeri...
Stau intinsa pe pat privind spre tavanul scorojit, vizibil atarnat sub greutatea timpului ce a trecut...
Buzele de colorit prunei sunt umezite de lacrimile sarate ce se preling...
Ochii se afunda intr-o mare de tristete si planset, ce pare a fi departe de a se sfarsi...
Picurii de ploaie reci isi fac loc printre cioburile ferestrei, aducand cu el adierea reavana a vantului...
Strang din dinti, sperand ca o sa-mi fie mai cald, si ca peste ceva timp, o sa stau pe acelasi pat, pe aceeasi vreme, insa cu cineva in brate...
_________________
I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

SweetPoisen · Vizitator

tare!tare!tare!!!! sooper tare!!!!!!!!!!!! ce faina ii proza asta...imi place cum scri...mai astept si altele de la tine! esti foarte talentata! :kissing2:

Nimeesha · Trimis: 29/04/2007 21:07 Titlul subiectului:

Nimeesha · Trimis: 02/05/2007 10:15 Titlul subiectului:

va pun totusi o parte...
chiar daca un comment e putin fata de cat speram eu

6.Reavana...
Simt cum parul ud se prelinge pe spate.. Picurii reci ai dusului freamata curios pe corpul meu, simtind cum rascolesc in mine adanci fiori... Inchid ochii si simt cum apa devine din ce in ce mai reavana.. Un val de lacrimi calde imi incalzesc fata adormita, ce asteapta parca sa isi revina din acea odihna vesnica.. Simt cum reinviu, sub apa insensibila, care imi invaluie corpul intr`o pelerina moarta ce straluceste adanc...
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I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

Nimeesha · Trimis: 05/05/2007 11:54 Titlul subiectului:

AUZITI, EU PENTRU CINE SCRIU?!?!?!?!
_________________
I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]

Nimeesha · Trimis: 14/05/2007 12:39 Titlul subiectului:

sunt 9 zile de cand v-am scris "AUZITI, EU PENTRU CINE SCRIU?!?!?!"
uite aici dovada de lipsa de bun simt!
_________________
I believe in sleeping in.
I believe in giving 100% when you only have 80.
I believe jamming out by yourself in the car.
I believe in kisses on the forehead.
I believe in smiling till your cheeks hurt.
I believe in being silly & crazy with your friends.
I believe in taking chances & making mistakes.
I believe in having someone tell you you're beautiful.
I believe in swinging on swings & running in the rain.
I believe in miracles & random acts of kindness.
I believe in saying hello to anyone & everyone.
I believe in second chances & that everyone deserves one. ♥
My Fiction My Fiction

Citeste [url=http://th-rock.myforum.ro/regulament-vt121.html]Regulamentul[/url]